awful vocals
and im not just posting this to be a dick here, so i'll actually give some criticism
get a better mic, because you can clearly hear the low quality vocals layered over the beat with almost no integration. you have to EQ and master everything together, you cant just put the vocals over the beat.
other than that, the vocals werent good and you should work on that.
Well I gotta say, I thank you for really REVIEWIN the audio clip this time and not just blam blam balm u suck blam blam, see, it' dont hurt does it?? anywho, the mic is all i can afford now.... I dont know, I think it's pretty good, I'ts like a silent hill type end cridit Musiz u noe???? - peace, i guess...
pretty neat, actually
sounds like a typical rave song, but it's got more of a backbone than most i've heard. pretty nice melodies and a bassline that totally supports the song. keep it up, dawg.
Thank you a lot for the feedback!
stop using garageband
garageband is the worst musicmaking program on the planet, i'd rather use milkytracker for fucks sake
mediocre at the absolute best, and almost everything you've done has been done before
the sad part is, even with your 0 vote, this song's score is still higher than most of your songs
however, i appreciate the constructive criticism, bro. feel free to go ahead and give my other tracks 0's, too, since I know you have plenty of free time on your hands to go on and do that <3
nope
the rhythm melody doesnt fit the main melody, and acid melodies are shit in general
plus you used FL preset drums and shit
Ok, everyone is entitled to their own opinion, and I respect what you said, but you did not have to be that harsh about it. Honestly, I hope you know that your comment did not help me at all. Thank you Asshole.
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